10-22-2018, 02:03 PM
Hi!
So I'm not part of the Rosebloods so I just went through and took a look at everything objectively and honestly I think you have a great Clan idea and I don't think there's necessarily anything more to improve on, it's just a matter of a lack of members. I know for me personally, how slow Rosebloods is, is a little bit of a downside for me wanting to join and getting involved with a character. Maybe you could try some mass adoptions and plot some things out with other clans? I think the exposure of Rosebloods would help a lot honestly, though I'm sorry I can't offer anything more specific than that! Maybe having something like a plague or a sickness (given the halloween season) and offering that as a plot to other clans could draw in some interest and some characters.
Additionally, though I'm not sure how much of a factor this might be towards it, I find that "evil" clans are typically slower because playing strictly 'evil' characters takes a lot more consideration and planning and can sometimes be limiting. Maybe expanding on some of their aspects into traditions and giving moral reasons why they're so evil or why they believe in these things might help? I think from a writing standpoint alone, it's hard to discern one specific reason for why people are evil or are willing to do bad things. I think in order for the Rosebloods to have that sort of reputation would be to basically sell them out as mercenaries. They're people who are willing to do other people's dirty work and to do honestly horrible things to people, yet when it comes to their own group and their own loyalties, they are a family and they are 'nice' to one another and are capable of interacting with other clans without just being the 'evil' group in the corner, for lack of better words; it's simply that trust and their morality is different from the mainstream idea.
Idk that kinda got rambly sorry XD Just kinda my weird two cents on it
So I'm not part of the Rosebloods so I just went through and took a look at everything objectively and honestly I think you have a great Clan idea and I don't think there's necessarily anything more to improve on, it's just a matter of a lack of members. I know for me personally, how slow Rosebloods is, is a little bit of a downside for me wanting to join and getting involved with a character. Maybe you could try some mass adoptions and plot some things out with other clans? I think the exposure of Rosebloods would help a lot honestly, though I'm sorry I can't offer anything more specific than that! Maybe having something like a plague or a sickness (given the halloween season) and offering that as a plot to other clans could draw in some interest and some characters.
Additionally, though I'm not sure how much of a factor this might be towards it, I find that "evil" clans are typically slower because playing strictly 'evil' characters takes a lot more consideration and planning and can sometimes be limiting. Maybe expanding on some of their aspects into traditions and giving moral reasons why they're so evil or why they believe in these things might help? I think from a writing standpoint alone, it's hard to discern one specific reason for why people are evil or are willing to do bad things. I think in order for the Rosebloods to have that sort of reputation would be to basically sell them out as mercenaries. They're people who are willing to do other people's dirty work and to do honestly horrible things to people, yet when it comes to their own group and their own loyalties, they are a family and they are 'nice' to one another and are capable of interacting with other clans without just being the 'evil' group in the corner, for lack of better words; it's simply that trust and their morality is different from the mainstream idea.
Idk that kinda got rambly sorry XD Just kinda my weird two cents on it
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