07-12-2018, 09:18 PM
(07-12-2018, 08:27 PM)impy. link Wrote: I'm gonna try to respond to your post, Orion, without making this seem wildly unorganized lol.
- Back and forth drama between two clans. There was no middle man and that made it tiring.
This I can agree with- two groups makes it limiting. But rather than just throwing another two or three new groups up there, just make one- gauge interest in it and go from there. You don't want to stretch the already small human game even further than it already is.
- If you weren't a plot-device within the clan's plots, you often felt left out.
No comment since I only just joined the site/the human game.
- Several leader changes for Blackfall that led to slow development.
I'm not sure if the leader changes would have been the entire reason for slow development but it may have been a factor.
- The history was confusing and too explanatory to be narrowed down.
Making a whole new world history (ie: hundreds and thousands of years before the current time period) would be even more confusing. Using real world history both keeps it easy to google if someone has questions about something before our timeline and BoB's split from each other. Want to know how racism will affect your character depending on where the world stood at the time? An easy google search can help you answer that question.
- Lack of more *viable* explanation. There really was no middle option. (Contrary to previous)
Perhaps if the history wasn't squished all together within 20 years- 20 years after a nuclear meltdown and the world would still be mostly inhabitable and humans just barely struggling to survive, much less slaughtering each other.
- The timeline was rather off.
See above reply.
- World building was done, but it was often left unexplained.
Then the solution is to explain it, not get rid of it completely and scrap it for another. The problem for some people (and myself) is that there isn't enough explanation, there aren't enough questions answered. Or the questions were answered but weren't written down cohesively.
- Griffingate and Blackfall were often undeveloped and w/o concept. They were meant to be polar opposites of the sort, but that never worked out as intended.
This goes along with the previous- worldbuilding needs to be established before the groups themselves. Shape the groups to fit the world around them, not the other way around.
- Underlying themes like intended never really struck.
Checking for interest beforehand is a good tool, though I wasn't here when the game was made so I can't comment.
- The world itself was hard to navigate around. Sticking the world in the real world presented a challenge and limited us entirely, along with adding a bunch of unnecessary rules and precautions that were not needed. This is why the history, along with liquid time, was honestly a mess in my total opinion. Though it may seem small, it created many of problems.
Alright so, I think we may have misunderstood each other when I said 'no' to a custom map. You have the current map, yes, real world part of Europe zoomed in. The territories, biomes, countries- they can all be changed how we see fit. A blank map of the real world can become a custom map.
- Though area size(traveling across several companies on foot) was a problem, it could be liquid timed. Even so, it felt unnatural.
Depending on how developed everything is would depend on how long everything takes. On foot? Extremely forced liquid time. On horse? Not so much but a stretch. In some kind of vehicle? A little less so but aware that it's not the same as it would be now in 2018.
- The conflict felt forced.
Has to do with worldbuilding and fitting the groups into the world.
- Plot-driven doesn't necessarily get everyone involved, sadly.
This I can agree with.
- We were having problems with the European map and making it customized, along with modifying current human history was a huge hurdle that was left uncleared for many roleplayers, hence, I'd like to say this: custom map. I know we discussed it within the Discord but I feel as if this will truly be our better option here. We have the flexibility to add on(unlike our current), make our own history, and an unlimited amount of resources at our hands to do whatever. We were limited before, but now we have something better.
- I will also explain that post apocalyptic was also a hurdle. I am still okay with this, but I feel as if leaning towards a transition from regular humans -> mystics would be better. A slower transition, rather than something fast like our current roleplay is. It leaves a lot of room for future add-ons too.
- Groups... three or four. Leaves for a good dynamic and chances to interact more.
First bullet and third explained above for me.
Second bullet: I'm not so keen on the idea of mystics just because it's not entirely my forte? I mean I literally play a human hellhound but that's not my point kdjfkgh. I like the mutants idea, I like that there's repression and political and social conflict but moving it all to mystics doesn't seem appealing to me honestly, even if it's a slow progression.
agreeing with this entirely!! i only joined shortly after impy, so i as well do not know much about how the human rp was in the beginning but being here now and seeing what it is and what it could be; the human game has a lot of potential if she try to avoid rushing these things.
world building is so essential to these sorts of things that its easier to plan out extensively before actually putting any material out. realistically an author would plan their fictional/nonfictional world and details out several months before even writing out the first draft of a chapter. but because this is roleplay, we get to work on this together! its fun, confusing, but most of all we can collectively contribute to something in the end.
i completely disagree with scrapping blackfall and griffingate ngl. theres too much potential with both of them! too much that can still be put into and growth that we can explore. could they use some tweaking? of course, theres always room for improvement especially in this case where their creation seems a bit rushed and thrown together within a few weeks. this can very well be fixed through building off of each other though, like we had in the discord! we had all enjoyed the idea of staying in the european area because it compromised with people wanting partial islands and others wanting there to still be a continental area. or when impy mentioned the cold war and jabber and musey bounced off of that and so on and so forth
i DO believe a third group would b a wonderful idea. dont want to stick to two extremes? thats what the third group could be for. theres your middle man to interfere with griff + black, and so many plots could come from that. temp alliances to take one group down or several other scenarios
personally the main issue i see here though is excitement getting to everyone and the rush to get all their ideas out at once. there should be more communication between staff and its members especially because from what ive seen some issues/concerns arent being addressed or outright ignored when confronted with. i would love to contribute to reforming the human game, and working with everyone else on the site to do so as well but not when i feel like some of my concerns wont be taken into consideration or be completely disregarded
thats all i have to say right now! <3