don't mind me hoppin on this / opinions on aya?

[aya]

Pwease Tell Me How I Can Impwove Aya UwU

[ophelia.]

OH I WUV SHE. i like a lot of how she operates and the subtle talk of what shes working on. shes a Very interesting character!! i dont rlly have anything bad to say tbh asdoihSHDO

[toboggan]

aya is cool because edginess is cool


i love her character because of how chill she is, to be straight. she’s building a freaking undead monstrosity and doesn’t show insanity for it. usually the mad scientist cliche doesn’t do it for me, but aya is played to the point that it doesn’t bother me.

a criticism? uhhhhhhh does she have any flaws? i’m not sure if i recall any.

[aya]

[div style="margin: 0 auto; width: 55%; font-family: arial; font-size: 10pt; text-align: justify;"]she does have flaws, she's overconfident (hence why she's building a whole monster) and she'll get more egotistical about her abilities as time goes on, she's unforgiving and jealous - a lot of her flaws haven't really been super prevalent in roleplay yet but i promise there'll be a shock when someone Initiates the Anger

i know what you mean though, i'll insert a bit of her flaws more in posts!

[HAMMOND]

[align=center][div style="text-align: justify; width: 60%; font-family: georgial; font-size: 11pt;"]i really like aya. since imo roleplaying is just one big never ending story, i like having characters with tags that don't give away their entire deal since it promotes more intrigue in the rping itself. aya has just enough information about her where you know the basics of her character and she displays just enough of her personality in her posts to make her a real joy to rp with. i also really like the mystery in the dr. frankenstein-esque plot, it's subtle enough to leave me wanting more cx

i don't know what else i can say really. i liked the og aya as well so it's hard for me to give any constructive suggestions. maybe explore her friendships/enemies a little more? idk sorry xD