+- Beasts of Beyond (https://beastsofbeyond.com)
+-- Forum: Other (https://beastsofbeyond.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=7)
+--- Forum: Archived Roleplay (https://beastsofbeyond.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=6)
+---- Forum: Tanglewood (https://beastsofbeyond.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=16)
+----- Forum: Tanglewood OOC (https://beastsofbeyond.com/forumdisplay.php?fid=20)
+----- Thread: look at my original idea + opinions on leroy?!?! (/showthread.php?tid=5417)
look at my original idea + opinions on leroy?!?! - toboggan - 08-20-2018
hey guys, look at this thing that i just started and everyone is doing it now
haha i’m funny
anyhow, what’s your opinion on leroy? i definitely want to improve, and i can’t do that without your guys’ thoughts.
Re: look at my original idea + opinions on leroy?!?! - ophelia. - 08-20-2018
oooh i really like leroy! the way you show his obsessive need to do things, like collect things for aya, is really nice! i also really like his personality, tbh! i guess the only thing i could think to improve upon would be to show more likes/interests or dislikes for him just in general, because i havent really picked up on much he likes as a person! does he prefer coke or pepsi products... this is the real question and definitely not a hypothetical to be funny.
Re: look at my original idea + opinions on leroy?!?! - toboggan - 08-20-2018
thanks for your feedback! it means a lot
i will try to do that more often, thanks for notifying me!
ps: coke > pepsi
Re: look at my original idea + opinions on leroy?!?! - aya - 08-21-2018
[div style="margin: 0 auto; width: 55%; font-family: arial; font-size: 10pt; text-align: justify;"]leroy's development gave me whiplash
i love that boy and he's my Son. to improve you could probably do with some more refinement of his new improved motivators™ since he's not into group domination anymore